Sweetheart - A Short Story

by Erika
(Coaldale, Alberta, Canada)

Photo credit: Tosca49 via I'd Pin That

Photo credit: Tosca49 via I'd Pin That

Sweetheart galloped along the road. Her hooves pounded in a rhythmic beat, her mane and tail streaming out behind her like a pale banner in the wind.

Her breathing became labored as I crouched over her but still she kept on running, never wanting to stop.

I was flying and I closed my eyes as she galloped on. The scenery passed by in a blur and ecstasy filled me as we became one. This was life.

Sweetheart slowed and I let her alone, a silent being melted into her heart. She slowed to walk and finally I opened my eyes. I looked into her large brown eyes, the color of chocolate, and saw love radiating in them.

I pressed my cheek against hers and held her gaze, knowing that true love and mutual respect was wavering back and forth between us. Sweetheart was mine, and I hers, forever.

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Feb 03, 2015
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Thanks!
by: erika

thanks sydney! please critique this everyone! its not my fave work but it just popped into my head. i don't have a horse of my own however i may be getting a mini named Sadie soon!<3 go HOrses!

Feb 02, 2015
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Lovely
by: Sydney from HorseCrazyGirls.com

I hope you will write more! Your style is melodic.

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