Starlight's Wish - Chapter 1

by Kelsey

I'm going to tell you a story about me! One day I was galloping around a field. Suddenly I heard screaming! I turned my head and saw My best friend, Holly, being taken away from a man. The man looked at me.

My owner, Emily, ran toward me. She looked at me and cried, "That man is going to take you away! He steals horses so he can sell them to other people!" I lowered my head sadly. Emily looked up and saw the man standing right next to her.

"Leave her alone! Stay away from her!" Emily yelled. The man pushed her to the ground. He jumped on me and whipped me until I ran. "No matter what happens! I will find you!" Emily screamed as the man whipped me. We rode for a long time. Then it went dark. The man led me into a thorny stable like thing. I reared and bucked. He knew I was trying to escape. He looked at me and whipped me.

"Come on!" He yelled in a deep voice. I was in a stall. There was more horses. They looked terrified. The man put this sleepy gas in the stable. I collapsed. I said to myself, "I wish I was free." Then I fell asleep.

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May 08, 2013
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Good job
by: Sadee

I agree a little but I think it is a sad story. If you like this book read Damage. I wrote it.

May 07, 2013
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by: Anonymous

I agree with Reina and why didn't Emily go tell someone about the horse stealer?

May 07, 2013
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great
by: reina

One tip sloowww down you need to build up suspense in the story.

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