Star the midnight horse - Part 1

by Sophie
(Wigan)


I could hear a weird clattering sound. I hadn't been able to sleep that night as I had had a really bad stomachache, I knew something was wrong.

The sound was louder, one time it was a clatter on the fence, then it was a whine, then it was a sound of a horses hooves. I was confused... But then I couldn't stand it any longer. I rushed out of bed pulling a jumper over my p.j. jumper...

My mum owned a horse stable. She set it up when I was born. My mum saves horses, mistreated and abandoned, and she heals them. We use special treatments of trust and love unlike other people. Other people are treat horses with disrespect and it is horrible to watch.

I couldn't believe it. I shone the torch into the paddock, and I saw an outline of a horse! He was handsome but you could see his ribs and was full of mud. I entered the stable and tried to go up to the horse. However, he had different plans. He reared up swinging his leather hooves in the air.
"Whoooo! Whoo! Hey calm down boy."

I figured this was going to take more work than I thought.

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Jul 16, 2014
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Good ending!
by: Kristina

Good plot, good descriptions, and a nice suspense at the end!!!

Feb 12, 2014
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Sweet!
by: Dragonfly

NICE!!!! I LOVE THIS! PLEEEAAASSE MAKE A PART 2!

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