Wow.. I enjoy writing poetry and stories, too, and this was really good! Keep writing Jazzy:)
Aug 21, 2011 Rating
Thanks for all the comments! by: Jazz
Hi, I just thought i`d say thanks for all the nice comments, I consider this poem as one of my best, and even though people tell me that I would go so far as a poet, I prefer to write stories. I find poems just as hard though, I`m now writing a book based on this, (My other book is stopped after I had writers block for three months) And I`m writing a shorter version while I wait for my dad to install Word on my laptop, I was thinking about posting the shorter version as I write it but I was wondering if people wanted me to because there`s no point posting if no one is really bothered haha.
And Unicorn: Actually I like that line best too, Usually my best line is the very last for me, I like to pull it together with something touching or sad.
I am a really hyper and bubbly person but I write sad poems and sad stories, and luckily i`m best at that lol. I find happy stories too easy because they`re too easy to guess, you know everything will end happily. Thanks again for all the nice comments, I am postng another poem soon, titled "The Last" :) Jazz :D
Aug 16, 2011 Rating
SO SAD!!!! by: Evangeline
O My Gosh!!! This is awesome! but it is still really sad.....
Aug 14, 2011 Rating
AMAZING!!! by: Shine
You are so good! I know you will be a poet someday. You know what words to choose that will bring feeling, and even though it's only a few words, anyone can see the picture in their minds. Amazing!
Aug 13, 2011 Rating
Hi Jazzy by: Unicorn
Absolutely fantabulous. I'm no poet, so all I can say is bravo! I liked the ending best of all: "Once to fall, never to rise..." That gave me goosebumps. Unicorn writer of: "More than a Myth" Intro and Parts 1 - 3
Aug 09, 2011 Rating
Speechless!!! by: Bec
I love it! You are an extremely good poet! Please keep it up! ;) :)
