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Dec 21, 2011
by: Anonymous

Wow.. I enjoy writing poetry and stories, too, and this was really good! Keep writing Jazzy:)

Aug 21, 2011
Thanks for all the comments!
by: Jazz

Hi, I just thought i`d say thanks for all the nice comments, I consider this poem as one of my best, and even though people tell me that I would go so far as a poet, I prefer to write stories. I find poems just as hard though, I`m now writing a book based on this, (My other book is stopped after I had writers block for three months) And I`m writing a shorter version while I wait for my dad to install Word on my laptop, I was thinking about posting the shorter version as I write it but I was wondering if people wanted me to because there`s no point posting if no one is really bothered haha.

And Unicorn:
Actually I like that line best too, Usually my best line is the very last for me, I like to pull it together with something touching or sad.

I am a really hyper and bubbly person but I write sad poems and sad stories, and luckily i`m best at that lol. I find happy stories too easy because they`re too easy to guess, you know everything will end happily. Thanks again for all the nice comments, I am postng another poem soon, titled "The Last" :)
Jazz :D

Aug 16, 2011
SO SAD!!!!
by: Evangeline

O My Gosh!!! This is awesome! but it is still really sad.....

Aug 14, 2011
by: Shine

You are so good! I know you will be a poet someday. You know what words to choose that will bring feeling, and even though it's only a few words, anyone can see the picture in their minds. Amazing!

Aug 13, 2011
Hi Jazzy
by: Unicorn

Absolutely fantabulous. I'm no poet, so all I can say is bravo! I liked the ending best of all: "Once to fall, never to rise..." That gave me goosebumps.
writer of:
"More than a Myth" Intro and Parts 1 - 3

Aug 09, 2011
by: Bec

I love it! You are an extremely good poet! Please keep it up! ;) :)

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