Hope and Dreams - Part 1

by Alex
(Australia)

*This story is not real.

It was a cold stormy September night. I sat in my room, gazing out my window. I scanned the backyard. The grass had turned brown and muddy, I could hear the rain falling onto the shed roof.

"Ayla, dinner time!" My mum yelled up the staircase. I joined her for dinner.

"Do I have my riding lesson's tomorrow?" I asked as I munched into my steak.

"Yes, and your instructor told me she would be assessing you." Mum replied.

"But I am already in the top class! If I pass tomorrow, I get to join pony club. But I have to have my own horse." I said glumly.

"Well I guess you will just have to stay where you are. You know that getting your own horse is out of the question."

"I know mum." I sulked.

After dinner, I sat on the couch and read a book while mum did the laundry. The rain became heavier and soon it started hailing. Suddenly, I heard a loud whinny and a loud thump. I threw my book down and ran outside. I couldn't believe what I saw! A black stallion was lying on the other side of my backyard, bleeding from her legs! I rushed over to her.

Please comment if you would like part 2.

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Mar 05, 2011
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I loved the...
by: Horserider

I loved the INTRO!!! OMG it was awesome! It really gets people to keep reading. When you write part 2 i would like to see an intro like that!

Jan 10, 2011
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Keep writing!
by: Rebekah

Keep writing its great, I love it! Can't wait for part 2. The story's awesome, wish I could rate it a lot higher than five.

Jan 10, 2011
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great story
by: viking villie

I love the first chapter so far...

Jan 09, 2011
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HOW MANY HORSES
by: Anonymous

HI ALEX! I GOT A NEW DOG. IT IS A MIXED DOG. HER NAME IS ROSE.

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