Heart in Hand

by Sally
(Near the Horses)


I don't think it's very good but I know all equestrians can relate to this so I figured I'd post it. Please give me some feedback so I can edit it and make it better!

Heart In Hand
The beat of horses hooves sound through my heart
His sweet sweet neigh sounding through my ears
Their graceful movements a blessing to my eyes
His coat like silk beneath my hands

Holding in my hand
A heart that beats with his
A Gentle hand, A soft cue
For only a few know this feeling
Many can say that they too have held their heart in their hand
But only a few can say, that they have guided another with their heart.

A gentle hand, a soft cue
All this leads to one
One that’s hooves are the beat of your heart
His sweet neigh sounds through your ears
Their graceful movements a blessing to your eyes
Their coat like silk beneath your hands
Only one that has taken your heart with care.

The horse that fills your mind
The horse that shines the sun through the clouds
The one that has taken your heart with care
As you give a gentle hand, a soft cue
With your heart in your hand

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Aug 01, 2019
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Good poem!
by: another equestrian

It's well written, you chose the words well. Cool title too!

Jul 19, 2019
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Sally
by: Warhorse

I like it!

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