Gizmo, The Ex-Race Horse - Part 1

by Rosalie

So... this is how our story begins. In a muddy field, in the middle of nowhere.

It was a normal day. As usual, I walked my dog, Poppy who is a Tanned Jack Russell. We started walking down our usual route, clambered through the twisted oak trees until we came to a stop at an empty field.

"We must have taken a wrong turn." I said to Poppy who obviously didn't care. "Best we head back the way we came." Just as I said this, Poppy darted through the broken fence leading to the field. "POPPY!!! POPPY COME BACK HERE NOW!!!" I yelled across the field hoping she would turn around, but she didn't. I had to go after her or she might get lost, I thought.

I began running through the untamed grass. At this point, I was panicking. We are usually back at the farm by now. I screamed for her hoping she would realise that I'm worried. I ran around and couldn't find her but I had got myself lost in this field. My hazel hair smacked against my face, wiping the tears that were rolling down my rosy cheeks.

Suddenly, I heard thuds against the ground from a distance. They became louder as if they were coming closer...

Look out for Part 2 if you like it!

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Jul 08, 2016
Great Story!!
by: AHorseLovingGirl4ever

I really like it! Please write another!! :D

Jan 22, 2016
by: Haddie

I love ex racehorses and dogs! I'd love to read more! :)

Jan 21, 2016
Awesome Start!
by: Sydney from

I think this is off to a great start. I definitely can't wait to read it.

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