Given You All My Love - Chapter 1

by Carol
(Illinois)

Violet before the fall

Violet before the fall

I could feel Violet's hooves stride into a nice even canter. She tossed her head and I still held on as we glided through the first jump. The second was an oxer. A worried look entered my face.

We circled and Violet tripped. She got back up and tossed her head even stronger. She ripped the reins out of my hands and I felt like I had no control. Because I didn't. I could hear my trainer yelling "Grab the reins!" But it was too late. She flung me into the oxer.

Dust stormed everywhere. She bucked and cantered away. After a few seconds of realizing what just happened. Everything blacked out.

Something warm touched my face. It was my cat's tail. How was Misty here? I realized I was in my room. That was in my house. I saw a thin woman with light brown curls and fierce green eyes kneeling over my bed. Mom. "Are you ok!???!!!" She questioned quickly. I nodded. Mom smiled and kissed my forehead. "Want some tea?" She asked . I nodded again.

When she left the room I sat up painfully, and looked at my phone. There were new videos in my inbox. I typed the password and watched the videos. I saw Violet a bay mare bolting and tossing her head at a the jump. She bucked and after the dust cleared I was there. Sitting on the floor like a huge doof. When Mom came in I turned it off and sat up quickly. "You ok?" She asked. "Yeah." She handed me my tea and suddenly got a phone call. She answered it. I could mumbling on the other side. Mom said a few words and nodded a lot. "It's, Mrs. Hailey your trainer. " She handed the phone to me.

"Hello?" I asked, sipping my tea every so often. I smiled. I smiled even huger and huger. Mom looked confused. "Ok! Bye! Yeah see ya! Bye!!!" I looked at Mom, smiling so big my cheeks hurt. "Were to go see Violet!"| I shrieked. Mom nodded and smiled, uncertain.

I was in the barn again. That beautiful horse and hay smell. I smiled. Then I saw Violet on crossties. I reached out to touch her and she tossed her head high, slapping my hand back at my face. She pinned her ears back so hard they looked like they were going to rip off. I backed away quickly. "What's wrong with you Vi?" She tossed her head and stomped her feet. I looked at her. She changed.

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Nov 02, 2013
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grate
by: Chloe

i love that story.

Aug 19, 2013
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Awesome!
by: Horsey Luv

This is such an amazing story! You should be a writer someday! I can't wait for the next chapter!

~ Horsey Luv ~

Aug 19, 2013
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loved it!

Aug 18, 2013
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This is awesome
by: Sara

This is great! Do you want to be a writer?

Aug 17, 2013
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Wow!!!
by: iloveyourbook

That is such a great story!!! PLEASE post some more. It is INCREDIBLE. You are a very talented writer. :)

Aug 14, 2013
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Write more
by: Riachl

Please continue. I love it.( :

Riachl(Author of The Horse Dreamer)

Aug 09, 2013
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Awesome!
by: ranchgirl

Keep up the great work. The ending really surprised me! I can't wait until the next chapter!

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