Free as the Wind - Part 1

by Lacie

What happened, where am I?

It all starts coming back to me in flashes. The ropes, pain, terror, all of it. My vision is blurry and my legs are chained together.

I hear a noise and my ears perk hoping for a familiar buffer or even a snort, but all that I hear are unfamiliar footsteps.

A dark shape comes into view, I whinny in fear and try to rear but the chains on my hoofs hold me back. The two-legged drops something and runs over to me with his hands in front of him. Easy girl, he says, but I am beyond soothing words.

He's so close, I can see his face and smell his rancid odor. I can't get away from him, he comes closer until he grabs the rope contraption that is stuck to my face and pulls. I can't fight, I can only brace for the pain I know must come next.

He is speaking quietly and gently stroking my muzzle. My quivering muscles relax and I feel my eyes droop. I give in to the overwhelming tiredness.

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Feb 04, 2014
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WWWWoOOOOAAAA GRRRL!
by: Abbi

HAY! NICE STORYWRITE MORE PLEEEEEEZE!!!!!!! IM ABOUT TO DIE FROM SUSPENSE!!!!

Jan 20, 2014
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I love horses!
by: Anonymous

I loved it! You are talented!

Jan 04, 2014
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I Love IT!!!!!!!!!
by: horseluver4evernever

Really Good! You have me hooked!!!!!!! Please keep writing;)

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