Forever Flame - Part 1 (credit goes to anonymous on my need a help with a story)

by Lucinda
(NZ)

The sleeping girl heard the shrill call of a distressed mare, she pulled on her jodhpurs and boots and ran outside. The mare's stomach was going up and down fast, she needed to get her mum so she started to go back to the house when she saw a small head come out.

She knew she shouldn't leave the mare alone, what if something happened? So she crouched down beside the mare and stroked her face, "its okay girl, I'm here spark," Emily said.

She saw the front legs but then nothing else. It had stopped, she knew she would have to get the foal out fast, it was stuck! She put her hands in and pulled and pulled with all her might and eventually it came out. She pulled the sack open around the mouth area so it could breath. There was a squirming little body on her!

She showed the mare her foal so it could suckle spark licked the sack of of the foal it was a chestnut colt! Emily knew exactly what they should call him, flame because he was like a flickering flame. He bounced about and ran around the stall. Emily grinned.

"EMILY!" she heard her mum shout, "EMILY WHY AREN'T YOU IN BED... she stopped as she saw the foal bouncing around, "what is it?" Emily's mother asked.

"A colt," replied Emily and his name is flame.
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part two coming soon, most credit goes to anonymous on "my please help with a story idea."

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Nov 11, 2011
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ive just done part two
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so it should be out in a couple of days.

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!!
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please write more soon.

Nov 10, 2011
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please comment
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please comment on part two coming soon.

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