Exciting day ends in tears...PLEASE READ

by jakiebabe
(louisiana)

I know you think someone falls off, but no...

I was packing to go sleep over at my nanny's house, when my mom walked in and said when you're done can you come see me. I said OK, but I was really scared I was thinking about a million things, who died, did Jake the horse I am IN LOVE with) die? Did the farm get shut down? I was so scared.

So I packed super fast and went to the front, my mom and dad sat down across from me...
AND SAID:

No one has died, but we have good news and bad news, which would you like first, I said good new. So she said OK and this is how it went:

Mom: Ms.Amelia (not real instructor name) called me and said that the other counselors and her took a vote and everyone voted for you to be a counselor next summer! She said you showed a huge responsibility. When you had water in your ear from swimming and she came in to tell you guys you could go swimming she said you can stay if you want and you said no I will go out with the girls.

She also said you did great with the little girl that got kicked, you didn't baby her, but you didn't say oh well get over it, you were kind and gentle and you did the right thing, you called me when there was no hope and you got her back to the barn safe.

Me: Ok so the bad news?

Mom: The people that sold Jake to Ms. Kelly want him back.

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So this is a true story and truly I can't write about what happened after that, I basically cried and am still getting over it. It happened yesterday.

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May 30, 2011
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starstarstarstarstar 		WHAT THE HECK?!?!?!?!?THAT IS....@#!$ %*~#
by: Evangeline

WHAAAA?????? why do they want him back?! and people say you don't what you've got till it's gone! you're NOT going to give him back.... ARE you? that is like, TOTALLY UNFAIR! your SUPPOSED to buy a horse PERMANENTLY! and you didn't lease him? you bought him? OMG!i just can't get over the unfairness of it! you should totally put up a fight!
May 25, 2011
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starstarstarstarstar 		Write More!
by: Anonymous

If you are ready, could you please write the rest? Also, fix up your grammar because some sentences don't make sense.
May 24, 2011
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starstarstarstarstar 		soo sad
by: meghan

Ya i understand it hurts u. so do u want me to write the rest?
May 24, 2011
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starstarstarstarstar 		awwwwwww :(
by: jennivere

I'm soooo sorry for you i kinda know how you feel well you see I love horses but I took a little break in the winter, my dad said we would start back up when it gets warmer but instead I'm still not riding and he said that last year but finally in going to ride at this new stable called tag along but anyway i feel for you bye
Jun 14, 2011
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starstarstarstar 		That's NOT Fair!!!!
by: Carolyn

if the people sold Jake, I don't think they can take him back. If they sold Jake, they can't expect to just take him back whenever they want.
May 28, 2011
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starstarstarstar 		Just a few tips
by: Anonymous

Here's a few tips:

Let us know who everyone is! I was a little bit confused. (P.S. Sorry if this is like a part 2 or something, then this won't really help you

Use more dialogue. Instead of saying, for example,

Mom: Go clean your room
Me: Ok

say

"Go clean your room," my mom said.
"Ok," I replied

Also, you might want to add in a few verbs, and tell us how the people are feeling.

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