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Trapped

by Abby W.
(St. Johns, MI U.S.A.)

(this is a story my friend and I made up.)

Once upon a time there was a horse named Asia. She had a shiny brown coat, a flowing black mane and tail, and a white star on her forehead. She was the most beautiful horse in the world. She was a free and wild horse. She rolled around in the grass and played with the other fillies in the herd. There was also a dove in that same valley.

It was pure white and so pretty. One day a man was walking around in this valley. When he caught sight of the bird. He said to himself I am going to catch that bird and keep it as a pet. It is so lovely. So he caught the dove and took it home with him. The wild dove did not like to be trapped in a cage but no matter how hard the dove tried the cage door would not open.

About a month latter the man went back out into the valley when he saw Asia he said to himself I’m gona catch that horse and keep it as a pet. So he caught Asia and took her home with him. Asia was not used to a stall and did not like it.

So one day Asia found out that she could communicate with the bird. So when the man went to the store to get groceries, Asia and the dove had worked out a plan to get out of the man’s barn.

Asia was able to reach over and undo the lock on the dove’s cage. Then the dove flew over and got the keys to Asia’s stall and unlocked it. And they went back to the valley. This may seem like a happy ending for Asia and the dove BUT it is not the end of their adventures together. Join us next time to enjoy another story from the series of The Adventures of Asia and Dove.











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Nov 16, 2008
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Great story..........
by: Summer

I love your story only it needs a lot more detail and as Sam said "exitement"

Jul 05, 2008
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that's a cool story!
by: Jessica

Hi it's Jessica. I really like that story. did you and your friend really make it up? I like to write also. But my stuff kinda stinks. Good luck writing another story!

Nov 20, 2008
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Ok
by: Anonymous

It was ok. But still, please continue.


Read my story, Over The Bit!

Jul 17, 2008
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Hi, I guess.
by: Anonymous

Okay? You need to work on your grammar. It is a pain in the neck to try and understand what you are saying. Try and make these more often: ', " . - and ? !. This is a note from Sam, my friend.
hi, I'm Sam. you needed a little more excitement in that story. i write plays and stuff all the time, so trust me. maybe the man that caught them find them escaping.

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