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Shiori Part 2

by Megan(Author of My New Horse Made Up Story)
(Spring Hill, TN U.S.A)

Shizen's new foal!

Shizen's new foal!

"Wh-what is it, dad?" Asked Shiori. "Well, you know that other Tennessee Walker stallion we have?" Replied her dad. "Um... yeah..." "Well, remember that I said we might breed them together?" "Uh, y-yeah." "Well, I did. But I forgt to tell you, and it was like three months ago when did it, and it would take about three MORE months to have the foal, and... well... it's been three months, so..." "Y-you mean that, Shizen is gonna have a foal?!" Asked Shiori. "I'm afraid so." Replied her dad. Shiori looked like she was gonna faint. (Not really) "Why didn't ya tell me?!" Asked Shiori. "Well, I didn't know how you would react..." Shiori's father replied. Just then Shizen neighed as if she was hurting really bad. She kicked the ground with her hoof, and snorted. Shiori jolted. "I- I think it's time." Said Shiori's father. "Huh?!" Shiori gasped. (I don't really wanna tell when Shizen has her foal, so i'll skip it, okay? I'm sorry!)"Aww! She's so cute!" Said Shiori. "Wait, we don't know if it's a boy or girl yet." Said Shiori's father. "Oh, your right." Said Shiori. "Okay, let me see if it's a boy or a girl..." Said her father. After he figured it out... "Okay, it's a girl." "Sweet!" Said Shiori.(She wanted it to be a girl.) To Be Continued...

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Mar 09, 2009
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Months
by: Anonymous

Hey, Megan! I think that someone may have told you this already, but horses are pregnent for eleven to twelve months, depending on the breed and mare. Not to be offensive or anything! Nice story, btw! Please keep writing, you'll be great!

----Anonymous

Nov 16, 2008
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Nice story
by: Summer

Okay- the second part was nice too but you should'nt have made the foal "pop out" right then.

Oct 24, 2008
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No, I don't. :'(
by: Megan(The Author of this story)

Hello! Thanks for the comment! And no, I don't have a horse. :( And I didn't know that they stayed pregnant that long! Thanks for the tip!

Oct 17, 2008
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BEAUTIFUL!
by: Windcall

Hi Megan!

That foal pic is GORGEOUS! Do you actually have a mare named Shizen, or is this a fictional story? Either way, I LOVE it!

BTW, not to be offensive (I still rated it 5 stars!), but horses are pregnant for eleven months before they give birth. Still a great story!

Windcall *:-)
JESUSLUVSU!

Dec 01, 2008
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Hi!
by: SUMMER

It's me again! Could you please comment on my story? It's called "Demon 1". Are you writing any more stories anytime soon? Waiting to hear from you -SUMMER

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