Blossom - Part 4

by Shine
(USA)

Sorry this is so LATE! I haven't really been on for 2 weeks(please don't ask why!) so that's why this is late. Please forgive me!*******

I flipped the page of my book about a boy and his horse. I was really enjoying it, till Laura burst into my room. "Oh Laurel! The Edison's are coming to visit! Ain't that swell!" The Edison's were old friends of ours and they had a girl my age who was really fun. Her name was Ellen. Her little brother who was Laura's age is really funny.

"Really!" I almost shouted. Laura nodded excitedly and we both did a little dance around my room. Then Mother came in.

"Girls! Stop-" she didn't continue for Laura had grabbed her hand and we all danced. Then we stopped, out of breath. "Girls! Please calm down. The Edison's are coming next week so we really do need to get the guest room fixed up. I know you're really excited and I am too.'

"Mother, can Ellen sleep in my room when she comes?" Mother laughed. "Laurel dear, we can decide that later." I laughed too.

The next day, Aunt Florence called. The news she brought me was like darts piercing my heart. Blossom had been stolen! All the fun days I had been planning crashed. What would happen now? I was shocked and angry.

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Apr 17, 2011
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Dear Kaitlyn aka horserider
by: Shine

Thanks for understanding this story came in LATE! And you sure do sound busy with all the stories you're doing. I'll check them out.

Apr 17, 2011
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Dear Ranchgirl
by: Shine

Thanks for your comment. You know if it hadn't been for your comments and other HCG'S comments this story wouldn't be going on! Thanks again.

Apr 15, 2011
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Nice
by: Kaitlyn aka Horserider

Lol its ok that it's late... at trust me I understand my computer was unplugged and I couldn't go on for weeks! ~lol~ but it was a really great story. Write more soon plz I knw u will.

Also check out my stories Summer Camp Mystery, Dreamer (The One And Only) as well as Nothing Short of a Cowgirl!

Apr 15, 2011
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Hey Shine
by: ranchgirl

I can't wait to see what happens next. I LOVE your stories.

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