Blackbird - Chapter 1 (plz comment or no more!)

by Ponyperson
(JA)


SUMMER:

I closed my eyes and breathed in the fresh summer air. It was a beautiful day out and my family had decided to go out for the day. I paused my music and heard my dad yelling at another car. We were going through an intersection and another car was coming from the side on our turn to go and then darkness.

BLACKBIRD:

I heard footsteps coming up the barn they got closer and closer till they stopped at my stall. The man opened the door and before I had time to think he tied a rope onto my halter. He yanked me out of my stall and pulled me into a dark area I knew the whip would come if I refused so I went in and I never saw him again.

Thanks for reading! Please comment!

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Jan 07, 2012
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thanks!
by: Anonymous

I'm waiting for more comments before I write more:) I promise I'll make it longer;)

Jan 02, 2012
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awesome
by: lucinda

this is awesome! you have me on the tip of my chair waiting to see what will happen next p.s please make the next part longer :)

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