Apollo - Part 6

by Shine
(USA)

Sorry for taking so long but I've been quite busy! So sorry!
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Alisha sighed and looked at the blue ribbon that was in her hands. The contest had past and she had won! It had been the most thrilling day she had ever had.

Her emotions were going all over her. She wanted to cry, to laugh or to just scream! Yet most of all she wanted to cry with tears of joy.

Apollo was the best horse in the world! She remembered the judge say, "And for first place, we have a tie." He paused like all judges do when they announce the winner.

Alisha saw Jessie clasp hands with Ashely. Alisha knew what they were thinking. Then the judge said, "Jessie Hughes with Flash!" Jessie gave a whoop and gave Alisha a look of triumph. "And Alisha Stevens with Apollo!"

Everyone cheered. "We won? We won!", Alisha screamed. She gave Apollo a kiss and cheered. The look on Ashely and Jessie's faces was shock and disbelief.

When the judge came to give Alisha her ribbon, Jessie her self walked over to Alisha and said, "You did a good job. Congratulations."

Alisha smiled and said, "Thanks Jessie. You did a good job yourself."

Alisha would never forgot that day when she won with her beloved horse, Apollo.

THE END

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Mar 08, 2011
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hello
by: aysha

hey shine, i haven't heard from you in a long time. what happened? have you been on this website? i hope you saw my comment. well that's all. bye.

Mar 07, 2011
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i'll think about it
by: aysha

hey shine you said in your comment that i should start writing a story of my own. you just said what i have been thinking ever since you told me about this website. i have been tempted to push the button where it says to write my own story. i decided to wait till my parents say that i can join in the club. you did it right? if not then what have i been waiting for? i would love to write stories on here. so next Saturday if i see you i will bring an extra notepad and you can help me figure out what to write. deal?

Mar 07, 2011
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sorry
by: aysha

sorry for writing that comment, after i was done i found your new series. Lazy me, i guess i wasn't looking. i mean really looking. man i need to go get my eyes checked.(j/k)

Mar 07, 2011
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your new story
by: aysha

hey shine this isn't a comment on your story, not that i don't like them, i just had a question for you. where would i find your new stories? i have been looking all over for it and still haven't found it yet. i forgot your new story's name. what is it called again?

Feb 24, 2011
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Dear Aysha
by: Shine

Haha! Thanks Aysha for your support. Why don't you try writing horse stories here? I promise I will comment on them. Thanks!

Feb 21, 2011
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hey shine
by: Aysha

hey shine sounds like your pretty famous around here. we all love your stories and i encourage you to keep going. i think you found your talent. writing stories, just like me. we have a lot in common. so what are you going to call your next series of stories?

Feb 14, 2011
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Thanks soooo much!
by: Shine

Your comments are all so nice! I just want to thank you all for your support. Oh and Emilie, I just want to say that I'm going to start a new story and I hope you'll like it as much as you have enjoyed Apollo. Again, thanks everybody!

Feb 13, 2011
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hi
by: Anonymous

please enter this address as a url:
http://www.horsecrazygirls.com/midnight-full-story.html

Feb 12, 2011
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Congratulations!
by: Unicorn

You can be proud of yourself! Not many people can claim to have finished a story, let alone with talent and such a fitting ending. Thanks for sharing it with us!

Feb 10, 2011
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PLEASE DON"T
by: Emilie

NO NO DON"T STOP IT THERE!!!! THESE STORIES ARE AMAZING!!!! DON"T STOP KEEP GOING!!!!! AND IN THE COMMENTS TELL THE PLACE WHERE TO FIND IT PLEASE DON"T STOP!!!!!!!!!!

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