Apollo - Part 1

by Shine
(USA)

Please read, tell me if you want part 2!
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Alisha Sevens is 13 years old. Her family lived in Colorado and they owned a property that had a stable, plenty good trails and also,a horse named Apollo. Alisha and Apollo were great friends. Alisha's best friend, Stacy, often came to ride on her horse, Charger.

Alisha and Stacy both planned on things to do on summer vacation, which also included on riding on Apollo and Charger. Finally, summer arrived. The first things the girls did was saddle up Charger and Apollo. Then head off to their favorite trails. "Yes! Summer finally come!" Stacy declared. Alisha nodded. "I know, summer takes forever!"

"Lets go out of my property and into see if we can find any new trails to explore," Alisha suggested. "Sounds good to me." AS the two girls went into the woods, they found a trail the seemed to go into a meadow. And it seemed well used. "You want to try it?" Stacy asked. Alisha shrugged. "Okay."

The trail was really nice. Then the girls saw two other girls approach on their horses. "Oh great, that can't be Ashely and Jessie, right?" Stacy groaned. "It is," Alisha replied.

Ashely and Jessie was not very nice girls. They were kind of the stuck-up ones. As Ashely and Jessie got closer, Alisha got more disappointment. "Hi Alisha" Ashely said with a roll of her eyes. Alisha looked at Ashely's horse. A Morgan. "Wow," she mumbled. Jessie laughed, a fake laugh. "Really, you girls sure do need to groom your horses. Or at least, buy new ones," Stacy leaned forward on Charger. "You need to study on your math."

Jessie sat straight up on her horse. "Did you forget it's summer?!"

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Feb 02, 2011
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nice
by: Aysha

this story is great but just like anonymous said it needs more detail and it needs to be longer. can't wait for part 2.

Jan 30, 2011
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best story ever!
by: Aysha

hey shine this is the best story ever i have ever read in my life. I want part 2!

Jan 07, 2011
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love it
by: delilah

I luv your story. u r so cool

Dec 31, 2010
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exquisite
by: Izzy

This story is exquisite! I love it! Please, write part two!

Dec 31, 2010
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PART 2
by: Anonymous

WE ALL NEED PART 2!

Dec 31, 2010
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Part 2
by: Anonymous

Ditto Lex! There are two problems with this story:

a) it would be lovely if you could describe the horses, just what color they are, what breed, etc. - just my personal preference and,

b) it's too short!! Write more!!

Dec 30, 2010
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Apollo
by: ranchgirl

I want part 2

Dec 30, 2010
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:D
by: Lex

PART 2 PART 2 PART 2 PART 2 PART 2 PART 2 PART 2

Jan 02, 2011
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Edit it, but part 2!
by: Anonymous

Liked the story line, just needs more detail!
Part 2 please!!!

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