An Everlasting Hope - Part 1

by S a v a n n a h
(Utopia!)

Rose On A Sunny Day

Rose On A Sunny Day

I cantered with my herd through the snowy storm through the dark forest, struggling to keep up. We were in search of fresh water, and i had no idea how all the other horses could keep it up. My name is Rose. I am a mare of the Oceania Herd traveling to Hidden lake and waterfalls with the Dahlia herd.

I am on the island of Sesshamaru, inhabited by many wild horses and a few ranches here and there. It was dark and just after twilight.

It was raining heavily and the herd was large and fast, i was a slower type dawdling at the back. Soon i lost them. I was alone and tired in a dark, wet rainy forest. How could things get any worse?

Soon they did.

As i walked through the dark forest for another hour, i exited it and found a circle of tents, a pole with three horses tied to it and three tents. I walked up to one of them and sniffed it. What were they? What was inside?

Soon to my luck the rain died off. I pushed gently on the front o the tent. Something from inside the peculiar tent moved! I whinnied softly and stuck my nose through the gap. The zipper opened and i heard a small shriek. I whinnied and backed up in fright.

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Apr 30, 2011
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No, what is Inuyasha?
by: S a v a n n a h

What is inuyasha or however you spell it? I just randomed a name, Sesshamoru.

Apr 29, 2011
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Amazing!
by: Jess

Amazing, amazing, amazing!
write more!

Apr 27, 2011
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inuyasha luver
by: Anonymous

ok admit it. ur an inuyasha fan aren't u? that's like the only way u could come up with sesshomaru as a name. so it turns out that utube isn't the only place with inuyasha fans.....

Apr 27, 2011
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Hi Savannah
by: Unicorn

Wow, that is a beautiful horse in the picture. I love your portrayal of Rose. We all tend to write about the big beautiful horses, the lead mares and mighty stallions, and it's nice to see herd life from a less powerful horse's perspective.
Please keep writing!

Unicorn,
writer of
"More than a Myth"

Apr 26, 2011
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OMG
by: Anonymous

Sorry it was so short and part two is worse. 3 4 and 5 will be longer i promise!

Apr 26, 2011
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Great
by: Kaitlyn aka Horserider

Amazing story... I really hope you write more. Soon!. Part 2 plz.

Also check out my new story Summer Camp Mystery part 5!~

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