Amazing Grace - Part 1

by Uncalled For!
(Earth)


I held the cold rope in one of my hands, a long whip in the other. My proud stallion raced around me in circles. Snowflake by snowflake, each frozen drop that fell on my face made me colder. My toes had transformed into ice cubes.

The colder it got, the stiffer my hands. Part of the World AKA Worldie, my precious sorrel saddlebred stallion started galloping, bucking, rearing, and doing all those not-so-good thing to keep warm. I started feeling cold, frozen, until I couldn't stand anymore. I was 100% sure I was freezing to death.

I drooped the lungeline and ran to my stallion. I hugged him to regain warmth. His blanket was in the way of his furry coat, so I had to grab on to his solid, bushy neck. I held on and shook everywhere. I had to get in the barn, or else my toes would fall off.

I guided Worldie into his stall next to my gelding Rusty. I threw off his blanket and revealed his majestic coat. It was furry, which is normal for my horses in the winter.

I fed Worldie, Rusty, and the others and ran home, hoping I wouldn't collapse on the way there. It was freezing, even in my house. Good thing I had a blanket.

It was supposed to clear up tomorrow for a horse auction. I was going to be there, no matter what happened. There I lay, in my bed shaking, waiting for tomorrow.

Comments for Amazing Grace - Part 1

Average Rating starstarstarstar

Click here to add your own comments

Nov 22, 2011
Rating
starstarstarstarstar
Wow great
by: charlotte collins

This is a great story, you should write more parts like other author's do for their stories.
Great Imagination and brill story.

Nov 20, 2011
Rating
starstarstarstar
hmm
by: lucinda

this is very good. i'm quite surprised no one else has commented.

Nov 23, 2011
Rating
starstarstar
Kool!
by: Anneka

I like your story. Good job!

Click here to add your own comments

Return to Horse Training Stories.